Wednesday 29 August 2012

Writing Activity

In class we are learning to use meaningful adjectives. This is my story.

Once upon a time there was a spy. The spy had hard gear and protective amour to stop the hard metal bullets getting through. So the spy grabbed his laser that can break hard shiny glass. After that the spy quickly jumped through a big hole and waited for the signal. When he heard the signal he quickly smashed though the hard shiny glass and saved the day.  

4 comments:

  1. nice story i like story's that are fearful spy story's nice job :)

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  2. its a good story and spy's are awesome

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  3. a very good descriptive story and it was very interesting to read and i enjoy your story's post more

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